It has been repetitive throughout her life
It's what made her to be
She hopes the next day will be different
and tries to put the pieces back together
Pulling her back and forth
Telling her different stories
there's discomfort, there's agitation
She thinks that things will never be the same
Will things go back to normal?
she tries to block it all off
but always manages to get the best of her
Because of this
she hides who she really is
It a good poem but i cant tell who the allusion is but just make it more clear thats all
ReplyDeleteGood poem, I like the way it's written. but like souza said, do make the allusion more clear.
ReplyDeleteGood poem, however there is no real allusion in your writing. Find someone or a story that you think fits/represents you. Then allude to it throughout your poem. You can either describe a character that represents you, or discuss an event that you feel matches your life. You could also make small allusions to the reference throughout the poem. AS(1)
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